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Comment on ખંડિત મૂર્તિ..10 by nilam doshi

nilam doshi — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 04:00:33 +0000

any guess for end ?
thanks 4 yr feelings ravirajbhai…

end is already written and published too.
negative or positive ..that u decide and yes..dont forget to inform me too

any guess is most welcome. from anyone…
manish…r u reading ? opinion ?

Comment on ખંડિત મૂર્તિ..10 by raviraj

raviraj — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 21:17:24 +0000

Nilamben,

Bahu j saras. Please, don’t give negative end of all these characters. They seems like my family now. I love Shachi, Mili and Lay. Won’t be able to accept anything negative looking at the title of your story.

Regards
Raviraj

Comment on ખંડિત મૂર્તિ..10 by Sweta

Sweta — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 15:59:44 +0000

Kharekhar baap-dikri no prem lagbhag badhe j aavo hoy che, sache j. mane mara bachpan na divso yaad aavi gaya, well, dikri ne vhal no dariyo amasta thodu kahyu hase!!

story is going very well, thanks for this part of the story.

Comment on ખંડિત મૂર્તિ..8 by nilam doshi

nilam doshi — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 06:08:16 +0000

શ્વેતા..નેગેટીવ કે પોઝીટીવ.દરેક પ્રતિભાવ સર આંખો પર..હકીકતે આ નેગેટીવ નથી. આવી કોમેન્ટ જ વાર્તાની સાચી કસોટી બની રહે છે. તારી વાત અને પ્રતિભાવ સાવ સાચા છે. અને એનો જવાબ તને વાર્તાના
છેલ્લા પ્રકરણમાંથી મળી જશે.

એક સારા ભાવકની આવા પ્રતિભાવો જ કોઇ પણ લેખકો માટે કીમતી બની રહે છે.

આભાર…

Comment on સંબંધસેતુ… by Dr indradatta i pandya

Dr indradatta i pandya — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 06:55:41 +0000

one has to accept reality but such thing occures in case s basically due less maturity,lakeof undrestanding,lake of saskar during childrendays,.the artical is best example for sustaiining life keeping equilibrium.

Comment on ખંડિત મૂર્તિ..8 by Sweta

Sweta — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 14:33:01 +0000

Nilamben, this story is really very good, but this part was very fast. Sorry for this negative comment, pan jo te banne ne ek-bija mate khub prem hato to pachi temni vacche diwal rahi gayi te naa gamyu, aatlo prem sagar jevo ane chata banne jana tarsya??!! Well, u r the writer, decision must be yours about the next part. Shachi mate sahanubhuti thai mate lakhai gayu. Kabhi khushi kabhi gum, its life.

Tamari badhi j tunki vartao khub j saras che. hamesha kaik prerna aapi jay che, maa- dikri no, ane khas kari ne sasu-vahu na sambandh, and vahu tarike maa-dikra no sambandh ane responsibility samajva mate.

You are all time great. thanks.

Comment on ચપટી ઉજાસ..14 by Sweta

Sweta — Tue, 03 Nov 2009 15:14:21 +0000

Nilamben, when i m reading this story, feeling like my daughter is also thinking the same or what, as my daughter is also will be 7 months after 3 days. and trying to touch everything and having fun when everybody is around her. I am really enjoying this story.

Thanks Nilamben, Keep it up………

Comment on ખંડિત મૂર્તિ..8.. by Sweta

Sweta — Tue, 03 Nov 2009 15:10:33 +0000

Thanks NIlamben, aatlu jaldi thi to expect nahotu karyu. karan ke aa story mate rah jovani thati hati, thanks tame jaldi thi next part upload karyo te mate, and as usual thanks for ur great writings.

Comment on ખંડિત મૂર્તિ..7.. by Sweta

Sweta — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 15:42:11 +0000

Nilamben, this story is really too good. and can’t wait for next parts. hopefully will not have to wait much.

thanks for ur great writings,

Comment on ખંડિત મૂર્તિ..7.. by nilam doshi

nilam doshi — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 06:43:19 +0000

thanks sudhirbhai..but this is not short story..its a 7th chapter of laghunaval.. already published in divya bhaskar gold.
total 12 chapters.
anyway…
thanks a lot.

tamari gazalo vanchati rahu chu….nice one. keep it up. all the best. many more gazal sangrah in this new year.! right ?